I would tweak that poster more if I had time - right now it looks to me like it has one or two drafts left to go - but time I ain't got.
When I was originally drawing that comic, I wish I'd been smart enough to make the plating on the outside of the blimp be staggered and uneven, instead of boring and regular. Well, live and learn.
Well, if you'll take a suggestion from a non-artist..
If you can work the time in I'd put a black outline around the blimp, and thru the plating. Big, thick-ass brush stroke hand inked 1970's cel black. It would really pop.
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Date: 2010-05-03 10:06 pm (UTC)Pity you can't put "starring every motherf**king star in Hollywood!" in there, as there are no Hollywood stars, just faux anime chara. :)
And besides, I think that's going to be the tagline for 'The Expendables'.
Man, just....I wanna go. dammit. stupid life.
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Date: 2010-05-03 11:08 pm (UTC)When I was originally drawing that comic, I wish I'd been smart enough to make the plating on the outside of the blimp be staggered and uneven, instead of boring and regular. Well, live and learn.
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Date: 2010-05-04 12:49 am (UTC)If you can work the time in I'd put a black outline around the blimp, and thru the plating. Big, thick-ass brush stroke hand inked 1970's cel black. It would really pop.
Maybe after May.
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Date: 2010-05-04 03:01 am (UTC)OK, OK, sorry. :)